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Hi Oma, thank you for your excellent question. In my experience the most engaging pieces of writing are always descriptive, imaginative and heartfelt. If you can enthuse your writing with your own passion and be as vivid as you can in your detail then this will enrich any written assignment. To increase your descriptive abilities it is very useful to practise describing close friends and family as accurately and honestly as you can - remember that you don’t always have to share your observations with them!
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You should use a range of devices such as; metaphor, simile, onomatopoeia, alliteration, speech, personification and assonance. A range of different sentence structures also helps to improve the quality of your writing. If you are being assessed and you are given a text to read and answer questions on, look out for the devices used in the text and mimic them.
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There are numerous English language techniques that can be used to make writing more engaging. Here are some techniques to consider:
1. Imagery: Use descriptive language that appeals to the senses to bring your writing to life. Create vivid images in the reader's mind.
Example: "The crimson sun slowly dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow on the tranquil, azure waters."
2. Metaphors and similes: Use comparisons to make your writing more relatable and memorable. Metaphors directly equate two unrelated things, while similes use "like" or "as" to make comparisons.
Example: "Her laughter was like a melody that filled the room."
3. Dialogue: Incorporate conversations between characters to add authenticity and create a sense of interaction.
Example: "‘I can't believe you did that!’ she exclaimed, throwing her hands up in the air."
4. Personal pronouns: Use inclusive pronouns like "we" and "you" to directly address the reader, making them feel involved and connected.
Example: "Have you ever experienced the thrill of conquering a challenge?"
5. Rhetorical questions: Engage readers by posing thought-provoking questions that make them pause and reflect.
Example: "Can we truly understand the depth of human emotion?"
6. Repetition: Repeat certain words, phrases, or ideas to create emphasis and reinforce a point.
Example: "Hope. It was all she had, all she could cling on to in her darkest moments."
7. Varied sentence structure: Mix up sentence lengths and structures to provide rhythm and prevent monotony.
Example: "Short and succinct. Long and flowing. Each sentence adding its unique touch to the overall tapestry of the narrative."
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Metaphors can be used to make your writing more engaging.
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Making writing engaging depends on a number of factors. First we need to know the purpose of the text. Secondly, we think about the intended audience. Then we get into the nitty gritty of persuasive language. There are lots of linguistic (language based) techniques that we can use to engage our readers or audience. These can include being rhetorical… including the reader in the text. For example, asking a rhetorical question (one the reader can think about and answer in their own minds. ) You can then go on to subtlety answer this yourself in your writing. This helps you to include bias (a point of view).
There are some simple techniques that can really help engage your text with the reader. Repetition is a great example…the more we see or hear something, the more we’re likely to remember it. If you want to be a bit more sophisticated, try using a metaphor (a non literal comparison). For example, I am climbing a mountain of paperwork. This obviously isn’t real, but gives a symbolic representation of how much paperwork there is.
Humour is also great, as are other emotions as we all like to engage with feelings and emotions. There are others but these are a good few examples to start with.
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You should try to include a range of devices such as; adverbs, adjectives, metaphors, similes, onomatopoeia, alliteration, speech, personification and assonance. Using a range of different sentence structures also helps to improve the quality of your writing.
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Click here to view my profile and arrange a free introduction.Using literary devices such as alliteration and groups of three words can be an effective way to make writing more memorable.
One way to remember is through the acronym: PESTL
P stands for persuasive language. This is to use language which will make the writing more engaging. Examples include modal auxiliaries, which are words that convey certainty (or uncertainty), but in this certainty would help. Words such as 'will' or 'would' is an example.
E stands for emotive language. Think of exclamatory sentences or adjectives and adverbs such as 'lonely' and 'disgraced' or the emotive adverb 'despair'. These are all words which could portray emotion in your writing.
S stands for sibilance. Sibilance are alliterative words that begin with 'S'. For example, slithery slimy snake! Adding 'S' into your writing or 'sibilance' could portray symbols of power or disgust. As the letter 's' is a strong consonant, this can add more engagement to your writing. Other examples are fricatives, words beginning with the 'f' sound.
T stands for triplets. A more advanced term could be the triadic sequence. Triplets involve using three strong adjectives to add more engagement to your writing. Unlike alliteration or sibilance, you do not need to have the same letter at the front of the words. Instead, three adjectives can be used to portray persuasiveness. For example, ''a strong, courageous and mighty warrior".
L stands for link. This means to link your writing back to the question. Or if you're following a cyclical structure (a structure which means you finish the same way you have started) you can link back to your introductory paragraph.
These are all ways to make your writing more engaging! Have fun.
Similes- compare two things using like or as- these can help the reader imagine what you are describing through comparison
personification- giving objects human qualities- the wind whispered down the chimney
imagery- 5 senses- sight, smell, taste, touch and hearing- the cold air snapped at my fingers - there was a rumbling of thunder
Hello Oma. A good place to start would be by looking at whether your sentences are too long and overly academic. To help the reader engage with your writing, consider shortening your sentences (particularly those longer than 20 words). Save your most powerful content for concise phrases that will really stand out rather than being drowned in a sea of words. It's all about getting the right balance as you don't want to sound too long winded, but neither should your paragraphs be made up of staccato sentences that have no flow.
I hope that this has been of some help.
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Hi Oma,
There's loads of great advice in this thread already, so I'll just add a few tricks from my toolbox as a poet.
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Click here to view my profile and arrange a free introduction.What language technique makes your writing more engaging? Answer: the rhetorical question!
Using a well-placed rhetorical question can cut through even a wordy essay and help your reader focus on the pith of your argument. It also helps you, as a writer, to focus your ideas into a single question that you can answer clearly.
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Here is an example of me using a rhetorical question in the introduction of an unpublished essay on morality in literary classics, where I used Wuthering Heights as a case study:
Critics and students alike are both drawn to and troubled by Emily Brontë’s Wuthering Heights because of its lack of what David Cole describes as a ‘moral centre’. He recounts ‘the despair of a bright student who exclaimed, ‘Where is its moral centre?’’ and who then ‘went on to argue that Wuthering Heights failed as a novel because in fact it had no moral centre’. Indeed, many critics identify this resistance in the novel to a single moral interpretation, yet most follow this statement in the same manner as Cole: ‘But perhaps this moral centre may be found by pursuing…’ Rather than adding to this ever-growing quantity of interpretations that such an open text can easily support, it is perhaps worth paying attention instead to the text’s exclusion of a satisfactory or consistent moral reading, especially given Frank Kermode’s argument that this ‘plurality of meaning’ is what makes Wuthering Heights a ‘classic’. This quality is one that Emma Smith calls ‘gappiness’ and identifies it as a defining feature of Shakespeare and the reason behind his literary prestige: ‘ambiguity is the oxygen of these works, making them alive in unpredictable and changing ways’. If a lack of a moral centre is part of what elevates a text to ‘classic’ status, then what can be said about the relationship between literature and morality?
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Depending on what you are writing, there are many techniques which can make your work more enticing!
If you are writing a persuasive piece, you could incorporate the following into your work:
Direct address (you)
Alliteration
Facts
Opinion
Rhetorical Question
Repetition
Exaggeration/ Hyperbole
Statistics
Triple (Rule of three)
If you are writing a descriptive piece or a story, you could incorporate the following into your work:
Alliteration
Triple (Rule of three)
Onomatopoeia
Simile
Metaphor
Imagery
Personification
Symbolism
All of these techniques can make your piece of writing more exciting.
I hope this helps!
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