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You can adapt this depending on the type of piece you are writing. In an essay, a strong "authorial voice" is often the key here: commanding/ imperative sentence openers, varying sentence length and style, and a mixture of primary sources (quotations) and analysis/ development all help to make your writing more compelling. A flowing and coherent structure always helps to keep your reader engaged, too.
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You can use a range of language techniques. For example, short, sharp sentences should be used to create impact, where as longer sentences give you the opportunity to be more descriptive in your writing. Always use strong adjectives and adverbs to support your nouns - 'a hallway' could become 'a dark, damp, gloomy hallway', which is much more interesting and brings the setting to life. Using alliteration also creates impact and in some cases, a sense of rhythm which can make your writing more enjoyable for the reader. Use repetition if something is important and you want to to be noticed. Even punctuation can help! The use of ellipsis for example, can create an air of mystery or suspense 'Then, suddenly, the phone line went silent...' Don't forget similes and metaphors in your writing. These can really give you the opportunity to get create with your sentences. Hope this helps!
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I recommend to try to develop your own voice. Writing from experience can help with writing clearly. Hope this helps ???
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In order to make your writing more engaging, you should explore both the type of writing and the proposed audience.
For creative writing, you could use:
sensory techniques
similes
metaphors
personification
onomatopoeia
adjectives
adverbs
sentence structure
punctuation
For persuasive/informative writing, try:
Alliteration
Analogy
Repetition
Rhetorical questions
Exaggeration
Emotive language
Facts
Opinions
Statistics
Triples
Structure
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Using literary devices such as alliteration and groups of three words can be an effective way to make writing more memorable.
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You should use a range of devices such as; metaphor, simile, onomatopoeia, alliteration, speech, personification and assonance. A range of different sentence structures also helps to improve the quality of your writing. If you are being assessed and you are given a text to read and answer questions on, look out for the devices used in the text and mimic them.
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Some people find the acronym FOREST SPIDER really helpful to remember these methods:
Facts and statistics
Opinions
Rhetorical Questions
Exaggeration
Short sentences
Triples
Shocking anecdotes
Personification
Imagery
Direct address
Emotive language
Repetition
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There are numerous English language techniques that can be used to make writing more engaging. Here are some techniques to consider:
1. Imagery: Use descriptive language that appeals to the senses to bring your writing to life. Create vivid images in the reader's mind.
Example: "The crimson sun slowly dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow on the tranquil, azure waters."
2. Metaphors and similes: Use comparisons to make your writing more relatable and memorable. Metaphors directly equate two unrelated things, while similes use "like" or "as" to make comparisons.
Example: "Her laughter was like a melody that filled the room."
3. Dialogue: Incorporate conversations between characters to add authenticity and create a sense of interaction.
Example: "‘I can't believe you did that!’ she exclaimed, throwing her hands up in the air."
4. Personal pronouns: Use inclusive pronouns like "we" and "you" to directly address the reader, making them feel involved and connected.
Example: "Have you ever experienced the thrill of conquering a challenge?"
5. Rhetorical questions: Engage readers by posing thought-provoking questions that make them pause and reflect.
Example: "Can we truly understand the depth of human emotion?"
6. Repetition: Repeat certain words, phrases, or ideas to create emphasis and reinforce a point.
Example: "Hope. It was all she had, all she could cling on to in her darkest moments."
7. Varied sentence structure: Mix up sentence lengths and structures to provide rhythm and prevent monotony.
Example: "Short and succinct. Long and flowing. Each sentence adding its unique touch to the overall tapestry of the narrative."
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It depends on the type of writing. If it is creative writing eg writing prose - then you should try to use some sensory imagery, and language techniques including simile, metaphor, alliteration, sibilance, assonance etc.
If you were writing an argumentative/discursive essay then you might use rhetorical questions, Triads (power of three), second person, structural techniques.
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You should think about your structure including different length paragraphs and sentences as well as using a variety of vocabulary, including different types of word classes (adjectives/ adverbs for example). You should also try to use other language techniques such as metaphor and simile.
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Hello Oma! Excellent question. There are a variety of ways in which you can enhance your writing in this regard, which are dependent on your individual writing style and the formal features within which you are operating. However, there are certain approaches that tend to be more universally beneficial; For instance: diversifying sentence structures, ensuring smooth transitions between paragraphs, avoiding run-on sentences and maintaining a varied use of connective words. However, I would caution you not to fall into the common trap which is the idea that engaging writing must be linguistically 'flowery.' Many of the most engaging texts are those that use language concisely!
Repetition and/or alliteration are two quick ways to make writing more engaging.
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To make your writing more engaging you can use several key writing techniques. One golden rule however, is not to overload your text with too many techniques as it will lose the impact - less is more in this instance.
The most useful technique you could use to make your writing more engaging is a 'triplet' or 'rule of 3'.
You see this in speeches a lot. Here's an example for a speech you have been asked to write about youth violence:
'Knife crime among young people has a devastating, deplorable and destructive impact on their lives.'
You can use other techniques such as 'direct address' (using the second person voice to directly talk to your audience) to make them engaged and feel included in your speech writing. Here's an example:
'Knife crime in our communities has a devastating, deplorable and destructive impact on all our lives'.
Oh, and using 3 x ds (devastating deplorable and destructive) is another great technique - the use of alliteration for punchy impact.
I hope that's helped!
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Metaphors can be used to make your writing more engaging.
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